Final Assessment

Dear Aviv,

I enjoyed reading your blog. Your English is quite fluent even though there are many mechanical errors (alignment, spelling, capital letters, punctuation). You should try to use spellcheck whenever it is available (like here).

You chose a good book about coping with a health problem that influences a teenage girl's life. By doing the blog you had to go deeper into the theme.

Good Work!

Your final grade is 88.

Yours,

Karen Noll Stanger

I did enjoy the way we did the book report.

I do perfer the regular way.-

It wasn't worth to spend so many lessons,I perfer to learn about vocabulary and basic stuff..

I learned more about my book when I had to go back to it to do the assignments.

I suggest to do a regular book report.

Diary

Dear diary,

You wont believe what happened today!

I had this big fight with mom and Deenie actually was at my side and told mom how wrong she is.We were fighting about the fact that mom has her stupid prejudice about how I am the smart one and deenie is the prettey one. She thinks that if i'll be in love with some guy i'll forget school and fail. I couldn't take it anymore so I told her what I feel.It all became a huge fight espicially after I told her that what she thinks about Deenie and me it's wrong.Deenie told her that she thinks the same and now Deenie and me don't talk with her.At the first time in many years we're sleeping together! I think that now we're stronger then ever. I got to go talk to you tomorow.

Helen

Questions

1. What deenie's mother wants her to be?
2. What did the model agency tell deenie?
3. Where is deenie's house?
4. What's the name of the boy that deenie in love with?

5. How many doctors deenie goes to?

6. What's the problen that deenie has with her back?

7. After deenie discovers her problem what happened to her?

8. Who is "old lady murray"?

9. What's the thing that deenie needs to wear?

10. What that thing makes her look like?

11. Who are her best friends?

12. Where deenie's father works?

13. What's deenie's sister name?

14. When did deenie and buddy first kiss?

15. What does deenie needs to do twice a week?

Enter the book

The things i'll take if i'll have the opportunity to get into the story are:
*Tooth brush
*Money
*Clothes
*My diary
*My book
I choose thoes stuff because i'm using it every day.

The ending

I want to go without my brace!
-Deenie,if i'll let you go without it this time,next time it will be the same,and the next time after it and the next one..you're going with your brace,end of the discussion.
But daddy!
-No daddy!
I was so angry at my dad. I decided to go without my brace.
I got into the party,I felt so good without the stupid brace;I danced like a freak and enjoied every secound of the party.
My dream actually came true, Buddy and I became a couple. I was so happy that I didn't notice where I was going and then,when I thought nothing can be better it happend. I hit
the table and fell on my back.All I could hear was my heart's beatings. I went to the hospital and the doctor said I have to do an operation.My mother and my father were so dissapointed of me and so do I. The oparetion went well and I learnd my lesson.

The plot

Deenie is a teenager girl she is beautiful,smart and has a lot of friends. Her mom wants her to be famouse model so she sends her to model aganceys. Every agancey tells her the excect same thing; they think she got a problem with her back. She needs to go to see a lot of octors untill they discover her problem; a croocked spine. In the most important year of her life,when she thinks that everything go well in her life, she needs to put a brace on her body. The brace changes everything.Deenie goes crazy and cut her hair. When she thinks that everything is wrong,Boddy,the guy she in love with,sends her an invitatioon to a big party.She decides to go without her brace but her father does'nt let her.She have to listen to him and she goes with her brace. At the party she and Boddy become a couple and they live in happyly ever after. I was surprised when I read that Deenie needs to put a brace on her body.It wasnt expected at all.